This is great. The rust has fantastic detail, and the tight shot of the bike works well.

I can see where you are coming from with old age but it doesn't shout it to me.....seems to be more a case of neglect....interesting shot though.

i could not give this one to many points! sure, the bike isn't new, but it being rusty doesn't make it old even though it is :) hope you get the point! the angle you chose does not make too much sense to me, cus the handle covers the seat, and this makes it look a bit weird!