i sense something is wrong...

that's a new way to listen to the phone, press it to your eye!

Seems like an interesting scene/story, but I find it a little hard to get past the lack of sharpness/focus.

The crop is a little tight, but the story is there

Great subject for this theme, great capture. The framing/cropping to include the "ARDAN" signs distracts from the strength of the story in the main subject. Crop this just inside the M's in Mobile and I think it is MUCH better.

I love the way this is composed. I love that the black splits the photo down the middle and of course, the person is indeed telling me something without showing a face.