Response to Negative Space (Response #5)

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pic-a-day said 640 days ago:

Hmm, not keen on the white corner/top, distracts me away from the focus of the shot

VernonTrent said 640 days ago:

@pic-a-day
the white corner is the sky. very important when you fly without instruments :-)

Ana said 640 days ago:

without the clouds, this would work. the clouds fill up too much of the space, and become a second subject.

luminouslens said 640 days ago:

Hm.

Not sure how to respond to this one!

This is definitely negative space.

But somehow it's not grabbing me. I think it's because the dark element (is that a parachuter?) is so tiny and lacks detail that I don't really know why I am supposed to pay attention to it.

I also find the white band at the top to be strange and distracting.

I would love to hear from you, however, what you see in this image because I have the feeling I am not truly understanding it.

kadenajack said 640 days ago:

The clouds surrounding the skydiver really serve as plenty of negative space. The big white area at the top adds nothing for me.

SeekingFocus said 640 days ago:

I dislike the large white area at the top of the image. I feel it would be a bit more successful with a different crop to get rid of this.

dcreighton said 640 days ago:

This just doesn't do it for me. Yes there is a lot of negative space. But that negative space doesn't really compliment the parachutist well. The white bar at top, possibly the wing of the jump plane(?), and the flat tones really take away from the subject. I think with a crop, some post processing, this could have more visual impact then it does now.

VernonTrent said 640 days ago:

from the theme description:
"...Show us how a little can be a lot!"

how a little white space can be a lot of distraction. thanks for your feedback. :-)

cheers
v.t.

King said 640 days ago:

Dangerous looking clouds. Could use, IMHO, some judicious cropping.

King said 640 days ago:

Vernon,
So are you stirring up trouble? I hope so.
Cheers!

VernonTrent said 640 days ago:

@king
:-)
it is just my interpretation of "negative space".

King said 640 days ago:

Vernon,
...in which case, I say Bravo!

pursang said 640 days ago:

I think most folks feel that 'negative space' means that it's one color or non color. For me negative space is 'space' so this one hits the mark.

pursang said 640 days ago:

King aren't you suppose to be tending to the wife?

King said 639 days ago:

pursang,
Real men can tend to their wives in just five days.

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